What is blood,

to the drained,


What is love,

to the heart,

gone shy?

What is life,

for one unborn,

to die?

What is sentiment,

to the slipping,

of the spine?

What can heal,

the one,

beyond  hurt?

You asked me,

I asked you first.



  1. bluebeings · March 25, 2016

    I absolutely love this!

    • valexiavaltero · March 25, 2016

      Omg, thanks for the feedback. Glad it touched your heart. Blessed be, dear.

      • bluebeings · March 25, 2016

        ahh no problem, carry on with the great writing and hope to read some more! thank you, it means a lot 🙂

      • valexiavaltero · March 25, 2016

        I will, and hopefully you will. Be well.

  2. ICC T20 world cup 2016 · March 26, 2016

    You can certainly see your enthusiasm within the article you write.
    The sector hopes for even more passionate writers like you who are
    not afraid to say how they believe. At all times go after your heart.

    • valexiavaltero · March 26, 2016

      Thank you so much for the feedback. Glad you enjoyed it and it touches your heart enough to comment. It means so much. Many blessings. Have a lovely rest of your day.

  3. Ed · April 3, 2016

    Such interesting perspective

    • valexiavaltero · April 3, 2016

      Thank you so much for the feed back. Im glad you enjoyed it enough to take your tine to comment. Blessed be

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